( ̄ー ̄)☆☆ ジュンジュワ! ([info]under_an_oak) wrote,
@ 2008-09-04 22:16:00
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Current mood: pleased
Current music:Epik High - "Breakdown"
Entry tags:epik high: inspired by, poem: all, poem: break you down

Poem: Break (You) Down (Epik High Inspired)
Title: Break (You) Down
Album and Track Title: Pieces Part 1 - Breakdown
Rating: PG-13 (for the swearing)
Type: Poetry
Archive: Can be found here, [info]epikfiction, my writing journal [info]thegeeklover and the [info]epik_high comm. Pls ask if you want to publish elsewhere and take out with proper credits.

A/N: I've always wanted to write a 'companion' piece to the fury and cold disdain that makes up Epik High's Breakdown, and [info]anon_chan's request for me to write one was the nudge I needed. I hope I don't scare you when I say ILU you bb ^^ Finding someone who I can really connect with when appreciating Sun Woongie's genius is a rare gift to me. Hope you'll like it. This is done in a somewhat different style than my usual. I almost added annotations but decided it was too pretentious of me, lol. Feel free to ask if anything's unclear.

NB: Credits to TheAsianMission and [info]carmendove at [info]worldvidz  for their translations of Breakdown.


It's 9pm and the president's on the news
He's smiling and telling the world of the innocents he abused
Just ignore the blood that's been spilled on barren ground
They're godless and ignorant and we'll take flesh by the pound
Just keep living your life like you've always done before
Just keep your head down and give an alm to the poor
Conscience is clear and look there's the door
Shut it now and you can play dumb as the devil's spoor
Litters the earth in the guise of justice
And Goliath plays the hero and David pleads armistice
The chalice in your hand is topped with the lamb's blood
And you drink deep and sing a toast to the flood
Of lies and propaganda bullshit that keeps the world afloat
While Alatheia is cast out on a paper boat
That sinks in the mud and quick, pretend you didn't hear
As she drowns in the filth crying for her shattered mirror
Go on and keep on sleeping
Keep on going through life, keep on dreaming
Just don't be surprised when you look up to see the sky's breaking
Don't give a damn even if it's made of tears and flesh 'cause the Ark's rising
They'll break the wave to bury the piper's flute in the rotting corpes
Of the ones you trampled underground, ignoring the noxious
Stench of the child who died with your silenced soul
While you're handcuffed to the chair and the president's screaming, "We need crowd control!"
No one will blame you if you play Judas to their Jesus crucified
Ignorance is the bed of the masses and you're too terrified
Keep your dreams to yourself and sing an anthem to the brass crown
Caper like a fool, to the king you're the clown
Dance with the whores of Lucifer in this Macbeth tragedy you're parading
And don't think there never was a warning
When you find yourself in the grave to mourn
The shattering of your illusions when it all comes breaking down



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[info]suah
2008-09-04 06:06 pm UTC (link)
epik should rap this.
this is greatly soul-satisfying.

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-04 06:48 pm UTC (link)
*huggles*

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[info]suah
2008-09-04 06:53 pm UTC (link)
you be tablo, i be hyesung.
i am high. i am an assassin. (how many asses in that) and you are my music therapist husband.

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-04 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Don't wanna be music therapist. I wanna be poet/librarian.

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[info]suah
2008-09-04 06:59 pm UTC (link)
awww.....free books for me and dirty things behind old library bookshelves (except like we oughtn't to do that)

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[info]kittykaze
2008-09-04 10:42 pm UTC (link)
Pretty and so deep, I like. ♥ Genius.

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 02:43 am UTC (link)
Pretty and so deep, I like. ♥ <-- Thank you!
Genius. <--That's too high a praise, LOL. That's reserved for Tablo, heh.

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[info]kittykaze
2008-09-05 11:02 am UTC (link)
lololol Why should there only be one genius??? :D Tablo still tops it all. aksdhajdsd

Btw, do you know where I can find the translated lyrics for Girl? I've tried to google them, but found nothing. T___T

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 02:50 pm UTC (link)
*blushes madly*

This guy I think, has some of THE best translations of EH songs, because he actually tries to make his translations fit the overall message/feel of the song and he also gives explanations ^^. He has Girl as well.

http://www.youtube.com/user/TheAsianMission

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[info]kittykaze
2008-09-07 05:20 pm UTC (link)


WOW. THANK YOU. :D This guy seems awesome. I just saw Younha & Tablo's song Memory. AGH. COOL. Thank you so much. :DDD

Oh and new layout. I totally love the quote on your header. askjhdjahdjajsh

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-07 06:01 pm UTC (link)
*grin* Thank you! I absolutely suck at this html stuff, even CCS, so I was kinda proud of myself, lol!

And yay me for spreading more of the EH goodness, mwahahah!

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[info]anon_chan
2008-09-05 12:27 am UTC (link)
lost for words my dear friend.
lost for words

you make me wanna take all your stuff and send Tablo a copy coz...i just feel that he needs to see them.

*beams proudly*

Finding Sunwoong was one of the best things to have happened to me. Finding someone who loves him just as much as i do, was the icing on top.
<333

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[info]anon_chan
2008-09-05 12:29 am UTC (link)
oh yeah i'm putting this in my lj =P

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 02:52 am UTC (link)
*grin* I love how you pimp me so well.

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 02:51 am UTC (link)
I am.....kinda loss for words myself that you like it so much. I am so happy that you do and that's just high, so very high compliment right there:
you make me wanna take all your stuff and send Tablo a copy coz...i just feel that he needs to see them

This is why I love words, why I love the power that you can have with words. People like Tablo who use it so well can build bridges. Sigh. I'm getting sappy and while having morning allergies too.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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[info]anon_chan
2008-09-05 03:49 am UTC (link)
hey i've been thinking about it all morning. practically it's not out of the question to send him your work. I have the address for the radio station, or I can work out where to post stuff on the radio website.

i dunno....maybe it will you know, inspire him somehow knowing that his work has inspired others.

have a think about it. if it's something you want to do, just holla. =)

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 04:15 am UTC (link)
....I...I would be so...so.....!@#$%^&*() if we can make that happen. I mean, sure, if we end up never getting a response I will probably sink into the gloomy pits of despair and dejection but wow, to be able to just let him know how inspiring their work is...

HOLLA. I WANT. I SO WANT. *huggles you to death and beyond and officially designates you as co-sharer of Sun Woong*

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[info]anon_chan
2008-09-05 05:50 am UTC (link)
co-sharer?
CO-SHARER????????

>:/

alright that'll do. ^0^

*dances around with my Sunwoongie hubby and...and...his other other half.* 0_0

xDD

okies. let me investigate the radio website first. there are different places where messages can be left but most are related to the different segments of his show so posting it there wouldn't work. there's a general messages section so i have to figure out which one that is...

and yeah, we might not get a response or any indication that he read the stuff...but i guess better to give it a go than not to and wonder "what if?"

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-05 07:07 am UTC (link)
*laughs* I'll re-start the war later. Right now, I'm too happy ^^

Very true, very true. Good luck, lol

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[info]firelights
2008-09-21 04:42 am UTC (link)
super late comment, but I really like this. ♥ Your Epik High inspired stuff seems to always be gorgeous! :)

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[info]under_an_oak
2008-09-21 05:47 am UTC (link)
Aw, shucks, thanks ^__^

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